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Hello Jukebox Writer,

This is my first time in this exchange, and I'm looking forward to what you write - I hope you have a great time!  I am opt-in for treats, poetry and interactive fiction.

 
Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest, and I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM, or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) ) 

Reynardine | The Mountains High
I know this song from the Fairport Convention cover, and it's so deliciously creepy.  I suppose I'm looking for backstory.  What exactly is Reynardine hiding from?  The law, or is there some other big nasty out in the mountains - he does offer the girl "with my gun, I'll guard you" after all.  Is he, as in some interpretations a were-fox, or is it a matter of reputation.  And what if the young woman should actually be the villain of the piece?

Take On Me | a-Ha
I am old enough to remember when this song first came out, and I *adored* it.  I would love to know more about the characters in the music video: what is that weird comic book world where people are riding around on bikes and attacking each other with wrenches?  How does Comic Book World exist?  Is it just one comic, or are they all blended together in some kind of meta way.  Does the art thing change the rules?  Like can people change their environment by picking up a pencil?  In a later music video (The Sun Always Shines on TV), we see that the relationship doesn't work out - what happens to the girl after that?

Mr. Blue Sky | Electric Light Orchestra
There is something so joyful in just enjoying a change in weather.  Would you like to write an RPFish story about Jeff Lynne experiencing the dawning of a sunny day in Switzerland when he originally wrote this song?  Something meta about how the sun and the sky feel about the weather?  Or simply original characters enjoying a sunny day and thinking about this song?
 
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Thank you for picking a fandom that I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.

General Stuff About Me
I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes and canon divergence AUs, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   I'm not sure if poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in for this exchange - if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Treats are lovely.  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  
 
Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest, and I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM, or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) ) 

Sir Gawain and the Green Knight (any)
You know what - one of the things that really strikes me about this poem is the weather.  The poet spends a lot of time describing the spring and summer that Sir Gawain lived through Feeling Sad about the quest he has to do, and then when he does set out in November, the battles and monsters he has to face are hand waved with oh yeah, "So many marvels in the mountains there the man found that it were too tedious to tell of the tenth part" and then it gets back to describing how cold and wet it is to go travelling in a suit of armour, and the hazel and the hawthorn all twined together, and the piteously piping birds, and how the white 'cut paper' castle thus stands out as something beautiful and delicate.  
 
And then we get to later in the poem when Sir Bertilak goes hunting - and this is not hand waved at all - we get a lot of detail about what it's like and how it feels, in contrast with Sir Gawain who is, his own way, being hunted by Sir Bertilak's Lady.  So would you be interested in leaning into descriptive prose of one of the events of the story?  What is Gawain feeling?  How do the fabrics feel?  What are Bertilak and his wife physically experiencing while Gawain is having adventures.  And for that matter, are you interested in this whole affair's origin as an elaborate practical joke - Morgan le Fay is Gawain's aunt for fecking sake.  Do Gawain and Arthur concoct a revenge prank?  How does it go?  Do the two courts get together and have a really big party to finish things off?  What do Bertilak and his wife have to say to each other after he gets back from the Green Chapel?

Hunting of the Snark (any)
This is a fun fun poem.  I confess my introduction was through watching  the Mike Batt concert of same when I was a kid - I'm very happy for you to include any details from this concert if you would like to.
 
Prompts:
- "The danger was past, they had landed at last" - maybe a prequel story about the journey to the Snark's land.
- Would you like to include more stories of the adventurer's on the snark's island?
- What happened to The Butcher and The Beaver after the end of the story? How does their friendship/love story pan out when the voice of the Jub Jub is a more distant memory?
- If you want to be more serious and post-colonial (or silly and post-colonial, what do I know?), I don't think it's a coincidence that this story about a great quest into the unknown was written in the middle of Britain's great age of colonialism. Everyone has their idea of what the snark is going to be like, with their great lists of things it does or attributes it has, but in the end it's a great unknowable. There are all these images of consumption in the text, but in the end it is The Baker who is consumed. Any idea of what happened to him after he vanished away? What are the events from the snark's perspective?
- Or something bonkers that just happens to strike you about the poem.
 
Concert version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KKitp2gmRas&t=2663s

The Franklin's Tale (any)
This is one of the stories that really struck me when I was taking a uni course to read through the Canterbury Tales - so wistful, and so focused on the loving couple, and how they can keep their promises not just to each other, but to the Magician.
 
Some thoughts that might go into a story:
- Arveragus makes a promise that he won't take "the mastership against her will, nor cause her jealousy, but obey her, and follow her will in all things", keeping sovereignty only in name.  This ties into ideas of Courtly Love where the woman gets promoted to the status of a lord with the man as retainer, but are they able to shift the balance of power so that they both feel like equals?  How did they go about this process in their marriage?
- the squire Aurelius is also following the script of Courtly Love, with his poems about unmet love, and making himself sick with it.  How does he pull himself out of it?  Does he find some other beautiful woman to make a cake of himself over?  Or can he get himself into a better relationship pattern?
- both Dorigen and Arveragus have a core value of truthfulness and loyalty - but the Magician's spell doesn't actually make the rocks go away, it just disguises them.  What happens when find out that this was a lie?  How do they react to that?
- at the end, both Aurelius and the Magician choose to forgive their respective debts, because it will make them be more 'gentle'.  Are you interested in the tension between a liberal and graceful person, versus the need to make a living?  How does that affect their other actions?
- this story is so intently set in Brittany with it's black rocks and intense seas - would you like to go to town on descriptive writing on what it's like living there?

Perceval, or the Story of the Grail
There's this most vivid incident at the centre of this tale, the episode with the Fisher King, with the procession of the bleeding lance and the shining grail paraded around the dining hall, and Perceval's silence is his great failing that he is recriminated for after he's left the castle.  It's just so weird.  Do you want to dig in more into how the Fisher King and his household got these valuable artifacts?  Why the need for Perceval to ask unprompted, if his cousin and the loathly lady both know all about it.  How much of his actions are influenced by the isolation in which Perceval was raised, either with his mother, or dropped directly into courtly life.  Chretien de Troyes specifically refers to him as 'a boy.'  What kind of man does he become?  

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 My friend Morbane is sharing a meme where you list your five most popular stories, and also your five most favourite stories, which got me thinking about how some of the stories I'm most proud of had quite a small readership.  That's the bonus of amateur writing - your primary audience is yourself.

Here goes...

Most Popular:

My Favourites:

I think the lessons I have to learn from this are that I'm most popular when I'm writing in the Regency period, and that I have a fondness for writing crack.  Welcome Yuletide 2024!
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 Dear Yuletide Writer,

Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.


General Stuff About Me

Welcome to Our Village - Please Invade Carefully (Any of Uljabaan, Katrina, Richard, Margaret)

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Lord Peter Wimsey - Dorothy L. Sayers (any of Miss Climpson, Miss Murchison, original characters from The Cattery are welcome)
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Rivers of London - Ben Aaronovitch (any of Thomas Nightingale, Augustus Berrycloth-Young, Cocoa, Worldbuilding)
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A Civil Contract - Georgette Heyer (any of Adam Deveril, Jenny Chawleigh-Deveril, Lady Julia Oversley, Lydia Deveril)
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Matthew Bourne's Sleeping Beauty (any of Aurora, Leo, Count Lilac)
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Dear Yuletide Writer,

Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.


General Stuff About Me
I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes and canon divergence AUs, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   I think poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in for this exchange - if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  

Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest. I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM; or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) ) 

The Sparrow Parable (Bede's Historia Eccliastica de gentis anglorum)
(The Sparrow)

I asked for this in an exchange earlier this year, and got a story so lovely it's made me hungry for more in this microfandom!  This is such a compelling image - the sparrow flying through a brief space of warmth and light, with darkness and storm both before and after.  I'm not exactly sure what I would like?  Maybe a literal retelling of the story in the canon setting of early mediaeval Britain, with the king and his advisors trying to grapple with this in real time (without a clever historian making them all sound eloquent)?  Maybe move the point of view to the sparrow itself?  Maybe go really meta and metaphorical?  Maybe invert it like the poem Grendel does in this link?  https://thijsporck.com/2020/07/27/from-bede-731-to-bone-1991-2004-a-sparrows-flight-through-the-ages/

Swan Lake - Bourne
(Any)
 
I saw this for the first time a couple of years ago and it really really blew my mind.  I had had no idea that ballet (dance theatre?) could be like that, I can just spend the whole show watching people's faces rather than looking at the dancing because this, and I have now come to find out, all of Bourne's choreographies focus on story and character, and the dance steps are in service to that, rather than a wall of women in tutus moving in unison, and counting how many fouettes.  I love how there's always jokes and moments for the supporting characters being popped in every time there's a little gap in the main story, and I love the texture, how it's never clear how much of this is magical realism vs the Prince dissociating from reality, and I love how in this version it's the Prince who has to be rescued.
 
Prompts: 
- I just love the Girlfriend so damn much!  She's this happy, bubblegum pink girl breaking into the sordid dark red and grey life of the palace, as much of an intrusion into the Prince's unhappiness as the Swan/Stranger.  I love how she alone, of all the guests at the ball, seems to be worried about the Stranger, and how, even with her self-interest, she does actually try to look out for the Prince time and time again.  Tell me more about her!  How did she get invited into the Prince's orbit in the first place?  Does she survive the night of the ball?  Would she believe what the Prince had to say about swans?
- This starts with the Prince having nightmares about swans, and ends with the same staging but as a peaceful embrace, a moment of grace.  What are the Prince's dreams like as he's a child?  How do they develop over time? What is the splendid view he was interrupted from watching as a child, so that he could go and shake hands instead?
 
AU Prompt:
- What if it didn't have to be a tragedy?  What if the Prince and the Queen had managed to bring themselves to touch each other, just enough?  What if the Stranger had been appreciated but turned down?  What if the Swan had managed to defeat the other swans?  What if the Girlfriend was just slightly less embarrassing?  Or the Prince hadn't seen her take the money?  What if...?

Brat Farrar - Josephine Tey
(any of Brat Farrar, Eleanor Ashby, Patrick Ashby)

This is such a satisfying detective story - and ghost story. I really love how this is an instance of an imposter plot that doesn't go all Prisoner of Zenda with the replacement being an improvement on the original - here, Brat is Patrick's champion.  I'm really interested in the life that Brat and Eleanor (and the unnominated Aunt Bee) make for themselves in Ireland after the shouting is over - does Eleanor have any convincing to do to make Brat alright with things?  Or would you like to do a character study of Brat and his urgent need to wander.  Is finding his family enough for him to settle down again, or does he have to deal with more restlessness?   Does Brat ever go back to visit Matron and the old orphanage?  Would you like to show what Patrick was experiencing during his childhood?  His perspective as a ghost?

AU Prompt:
What if 'Brat Farrar' really was Patrick, who had somehow managed to survive the murder attempt and fled.  Does he come back remembering who he is?  Or is some of it a blank and he's working on instinct?

Welcome to Our Village - Please Invade Carefully
(Any of Uljabaan, Lucy, Katrina)

I literally just found this fandom from the fandom promotion plot.  It's great!  So much absurdity, perfectly timed dialogue, and the inexorable pull of country village life thwarting the hostile invasion attempt.  And the fact that Uljabaan, Katrina and Lucy are all Sworn Enemies (TM), but they're always in and out of each other's houses. 

Would you like to go into another Enemy Plot/Foil and Thwart attempt between Uljabaan and Katrina and Lucy?  Or go back and do a prequel of the events so efficiently summed up in the pilot episode and show what Uljabaan's arrival (as lost heir, and then alien commander) actually looked like?  Katrina is supposed to have an ex-boyfriend who's an Arsenal fan - by some convoluted turn of events does he turn up at all?  Does the outside world ever figure out what's going on?  They're not nominated, but I'd also love more Minions-action, with their love of cake and Jane Austen and general good humoured incompetence.  Do they get infected by humanity?  Does Uljabaan?  Is there a point where he gets a chance to leave and just...doesn't?

Love's Labours' Lost - RSC 2014
(Any of Rosaline, Berowne, Princess of France, Dumaine's Teddy Bear)

This specific production of Love's Labours' Lost is the version done in 2014 as a paired production with Much Ado About Nothing (which was advertised as Love's Labours' Won) as a way to memorialise the Great War.  It's also the version where they thought hard about how to turn Shakespeare into an operetta, with beautiful singing, an extended musical theatre number for the play-within-a-play section at the end, and some demented dancing cossacks turning up at a key point.  All of which is to say that it's a lot of fun, and I love it to bits, while also recognising the dark moment in history that they're building up to.  (Here's a couple of internet primers of the plot for you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_xlbjxtP7I, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17jLGj_pBQ8)

Prompts:
- Would you like to dig more into Berowne and Rosaline's relationship with each other?  What happened when they danced in Brabante?  Why does he think she 'does the deed'?  (And does she?)  Do they get to meet again after Berowne's year of service in a hospice?  What would that service  look like in the context of WWI?  And what kind of feelings does he have about going into hospitals when Britain is trying to recruit as many fighters as it can get.
- I love the Princess of France, who has so much wit and poise when dealing with a group of overgrown schoolboys who think they're in a competition with her - and she's always winning.  Would you like to talk about her career as a diplomat?  Her relationship with her Ladies?  Does she reconcile with the King of Navarre?  
- I've asked for Dumaine's teddy bear because I love that scene with everyone in their pyjamas all having the same thought on where to go to have a quiet soliloquy, and the stage business with the teddy bear pretty much sums up all the absurdity that went into it (along with, frankly, Dumaine's hairnet and the, ahem, varying quality of the poetry displayed.)  Would you like to bring in some more stage business with the teddy bear?  Does it become a mascot for the soldiers gone to war?  Is there a story about why Dumaine likes it so much?  (Here's a short clip, but watching the whole thing is better ! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGtgy6BCy20)
- Can you think of an excuse to wedge in another song and dance number?  More is more!
- These are not nominated characters, but I also really love Moth's and Don Armado's friendship with each other - if you'd like to write them into your story, I'd love to see them.
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 Dear Once Upon A Fic Writer,

Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.

General Stuff About Me
I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes and canon divergence AUs, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   I'm not sure if poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in for this exchange - but if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  

Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest. I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM; or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) ) 

The Sparrow Parable (Bede's Historia Eccliastica de gentis anglorum)
This is such a compelling image - the sparrow flying through a brief space of warmth and light, with darkness and storm both before and after.  I'm not exactly sure what I would like?  Maybe a literal retelling of the story in the canon setting of early mediaeval Britain, with the king and his advisors trying to grapple with this in real time (without a clever historian making them all sound eloquent)?  Maybe move the point of view to the sparrow itself?  Maybe go really meta and metaphorical?  Maybe invert it like the poem Grendel does in this link?  https://thijsporck.com/2020/07/27/from-bede-731-to-bone-1991-2004-a-sparrows-flight-through-the-ages/

Reynardine | The Mountains High
I know this song from the Fairport Convention cover, and it's so deliciously creepy.  I suppose I'm looking for backstory.  What exactly is Reynardine hiding from?  The law, or is there some other big nasty out in the mountains - he does offer the girl "with my gun, I'll guard you" after all.  Is he, as in some interpretations a were-fox, or is it a matter of reputation.  And what if the young woman should actually be the villain of the piece?

Banks of the Sweet Primroses
This is my happy place song (which I also know from Fairport Convention), but when I looked it up apparently there are very many versions of this which are mostly identical, showcasing its strength both as a melody and a set of lyrics.  What's the background to this story - how has the Fair Maid gotten to know the Narrator so well that she's in love with him and yet leave him oblivious?  How did either of them find their way to the lonesome valley with the primroses?  Were there any village events associated with midsummer that are going on around them?  Are there any of their neighbours doing a bit of matchmaking?  I'm all about happy endings with this song.

Pangur Bán
There is so much affection in this poem, and confirmation that - yes, people did have pets in the Middle Ages, too. Would you like to write a day in the life between Pangur and his scholar? Or the kind of poem that Pangur would write about his master - what would a cat think about a good companion who's always at his books. I'm more used to the "I and Pangur Bán my cat" translation by Robin Flowers, but I noticed that the 'official' source for this challenge has got some additional nuance - the cat's job is mastering his daily work, but the scholar's job is "to bring difficulty to clearness" - would you like to explore that?

 Sir Gawain and the Green Knight

You know what - one of the things that really strikes me about this poem is the weather.  The poet spends a lot of time describing the spring and summer that Sir Gawain lived through Feeling Sad about the quest he has to do, and then when he does set out in November, the battles and monsters he has to face are hand waved with oh yeah, "So many marvels in the mountains there the man found that it were too tedious to tell of the tenth part" and then it gets back to describing how cold and wet it is to go travelling in a suit of armour, and the hazel and the hawthorn all twined together, and the piteously piping birds, and how the white 'cut paper' castle thus stands out as something beautiful and delicate.  
 
And then we get to later in the poem when Sir Bertilak goes hunting - and this is not hand waved at all - we get a lot of detail about what it's like and how it feels, in contrast with Sir Gawain who is, his own way, being hunted by Sir Bertilak's Lady.  So would you be interested in leaning into descriptive prose of one of the events of the story?  What is Gawain feeling?  How do the fabrics feel?  What are Bertilak and his wife physically experiencing while Gawain is having adventures.  And for that matter, are you interested in this whole affair's origin as an elaborate practical joke - Morgan le Fay is Gawain's aunt for fecking sake.  Do Gawain and Arthur concoct a revenge prank?  How does it go?  Do the two courts get together and have a really big party to finish things off?  What do Bertilak and his wife have to say to each other after he gets back from the Green Chapel?

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 Dear Yuletide Writer,
 
Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.
 
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Dear Once Upon A Fic Writer,

Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time in this exchange, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.

General Stuff About Me
I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes and canon divergence AUs, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   I'm not sure if poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in for this exchange - but if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  

Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest. I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM; or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) ) 

Scarborough Fair (Traditional Ballad)
I just find this a weird (though comforting) song.  Would you like to tell the story of the Singer and his/her/their attempt to gain the heart of the True Love?  Are they super pragmatic and practical about how to achieve the challenges?  Do they have magical assistance in some way?  (Although my heart goes out to pragmatic people everywhere).  Would you like to do a modern day version of this?  Or some period of interest to you?  Or an 'urban legend' style story tied to a place time arising from events from a while ago that got garbled in the retelling? I'm most familiar with the Simon and Garfunkel version, but do go ahead and pull in details from other versions of the ballad if you like them.

The Sparrow Parable (Bede's Historia Eccliastica de gentis anglorum)
This is such a compelling image - the sparrow flying through a brief space of warmth and light, with darkness and storm both before and after.  I'm not exactly sure what I would like?  Maybe a literal retelling of the story in the canon setting of early mediaeval Britain, with the king and his advisors trying to grapple with this in real time (without a clever historian making them all sound eloquent)?  Maybe move the point of view to the sparrow itself?  Maybe go really meta and metaphorical?  Maybe invert it like the poem Grendel does in this link?  https://thijsporck.com/2020/07/27/from-bede-731-to-bone-1991-2004-a-sparrows-flight-through-the-ages/

Venus and Adonis Myth (Ovid's Metamorpheses)
I always feel sorry for Myrrha when I read this story, she was just a kid.  Her father (we can't call him her Dad, not really) should have known not to go to bed with *anyone* he didn't know the identity of, especially someone who was young enough to be his daugher!  (I generally put incest in as a Do Not Want, please tread lightly in this area if that's an incident you want to write.)
But then there's Adonis, this beautiful baby boy.  Ovid skips his childhood and adolescence (although I've read a different version where he has to split his time between Aphrodite and Persephone) - so what was his first meeting with Venus like?  Did he love her back?  What did he think about this very beautiful goddess 'ruining her looks' by getting a suntan and wearing athleisure (OK, kilting up her skirts *technically*) to keep up with him?  Did he have any forebodings about his death, or did he think he was immortal?

De vilde Svaner | The Wild Swans (Hans Christian Andersen)
The Hans Christian Anderson version of this story has such splendid imagery of the soft seawater that yet can wear done stones, and Elisa crossing the ocean carried by her swan brothers.  There's always such a focus in this tale on not being able to speak: the swans are cursed to be voiceless, and Elisa must be voiceless by choice if she wants to rescue them.  And in all the versions of this I've read, the youngest brother is always left with a swan wing, his sister's work unfinished.  How does he feel about it?  And how can the King who marries her really be in love with her?  What is she thinking during her marriage?  Why *did* he think it was OK to pick her up and carry her off even though she was crying.
Would you like to write a setting change of this story?  Or revise it so that there's a happier ending?  What if Elisa never meets the king, or manages to convince him to leave her alone?  What if Fata Morgana has a bigger role to play in this story - is she in a feud with the stepmother, or a nice (magical) person, or more than that?
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Dear Yuletide Writer,

Thank you for picking something I like! I hope you have a lovely time this festive season, and also that someones writes something just as wonderful for you.

General Stuff About Me
I've been participating in Yuletide for a while now and really enjoying it - both for the writing and the sheer cheerful juggernaut nature of the event. ;-) Some things I've noticed about myself is that I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes and canon divergence AUs, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   Apparently, poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in now - if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  

All my prompts are for Either/Any/Or use any combination of suggested characters that works for you.

Squicks and Do Not Wants
I'm seriously not into non-consensual or underage sex. I also don't like graphic torture scenes or incest. I'm not much interested in reading a story about consensual BDSM; or where pregnancy or infertility is the main focus.  I'm more interested in how characters' relationships work out with each other than erotica and I would rather not get an M or E rated story.  I think it would be hard to link my current prompts to current world events, but please don't try, I want some escapism! (Ta :-) )

Sense and Sensibility - Jane Austen (Any)
I have thrown in some AU suggestions for funsies.  As always, pick up anything you like, and don't mind the rest.  (I do love a happy ending, though, even if we have to go through bittersweet to get there.)

Canon Prompts:
- I find it really interesting how the novel really really emphasises that Elinor and Brandon are very good friends, to the point where interested bystanders are expecting him to make an offer for her.  What are their respective married lives like as platonic friends and neighbours?  How do they manage potential jealousies in their spouses?
- For that matter, the climax of the novel doesn't win Marianne for Brandon, he wins the right to court her.  What are those gentle two years in which she's visiting with his neighbour like?  What are the things that change her opinions from pity to attachment?
- We hear about Brandon's ill-fated sister-in-law Eliza Brandon, and her not quite so ill-fated ward Eliza Williams, but we never get to see them directly.  Their story line is so confrontationally gothic, so much so that whenever the very sensitive and well-mannered Brandon talks about them, his speech breaks out in emdashes.  What were these two young women like?  Can we see how the story happens from their point of view?  Because the elder Eliza's story is so sad, hopefully if you choose this prompt, the story can end on at least the glimmer of a happy note.

AU Prompts:
- One of the nice background details I recently found out about the 1995 movie is that Emma Thompson and Greg Wise (the actor of Willoughby) met on the set and Fell In Love, and are married to this day.  How would an AU in which Elinor and Willoughby get together work out?  (Happy endings preferred.)
- Canonically, Elinor and Marianne are both dark in their hair and eyes, and Marianne has a brown complexion.  What's the AU in which they either have, or are assumed to have, African ancestry?  How would that fit in with the intense Abolition politics of the time?
- Eliza Brandon's marriage to Brandon's older brother was coerced, and therefore illegal, and therefore she could have got an annulment if she'd had a good lawyer on her side.  What would it have been like if Brandon had come home early from India and helped her out?  (Either back at the time, or in the time period of the novel in which he meets Elinor and Marianne?)

Twelfth Night 1996 - (Viola/Cesario, Olivia, Feste, Count Orsino)
I saw this Imogen Stubbs adaptation back when it originally came out (yes, I'm old), and it remains one of the funniest movies I've ever seen. I love the great delicacy of the adaptation in taking a laugh where there's a laugh to be had, but using it to counterpoint the savagery of the emotions that the characters are dealing with.  I also love how Viola and Olivia are paired characters, who both need a reason to smile again, and how that works out through the machinations of their not-really romance with each other, and how Viola's interactions with Orsino are a series of moments where she has to go out of her comfort zone with smoking and fencing and horse riding, and literally learning how to throw her heart over a fence when she's riding.  How does that need that both of them have follow them into married life?  And, oh gosh, my favourite throwaway moment is when Viola and Orsino are playing billiards and she accidentally manages a trick shot and has to fake being nonchalant about it.  Do they ever play billiards again?

Finally, Feste in this version is a very fractured individual - was he always like this?  did something happen to him?  He and Olivia find such obvious comfort in each other - how long have they known each other, how did Feste come to be attached to her household?


The Masqueraders - Georgette Heyer (Robin, Prudence)
I quite like this as an adventure story, and it has charm both for the fact that the menfolk get to wear brightly coloured coats and jewelled buckles just as much as the women do, and a general more louche, more dangerous feeling of the setting compared to Heyer's more delicate regency fare.

I really enjoy the fragmentary bits and pieces we hear of Robin and Prue's adventures with the old gentleman.  I would love to read more about their shady past, or their married future.  What was Prue's relationship with her mother like, and how is it different to Robin's?  Also, Robin takes the failure '45 Rebellion much more to heart than Prue and their father do: would you like to write more about his involvement in the Rebellion?  Had he already met Charles Stewart in Italy or France?  How did he get on with Bonnie Prince Charlie?  When Sir Tony is discussing his intention to marry Prue with Robin, Robin is really clear that he considers himself the responsible man of the family whose permission must be asked - what are some of the past butting heads incidents between him and his Dad?  What's the AU in which Prue did have to fight that duel with Rensley?

Also, since I've separately asked for Twelfth Night - I'm a bit curious.  Do Robin and Prue admire that play and its sister As You Like It, or do they critique it for technique?

The Windrose Chronicles (Joanna Sheraton, Stonne Caris, Pellicida)

I am just now rereading this series after some years and had a seriously bad moment when I realised that my copy of The Silicon Mage was permanently lost and it's out of print (found a SH copy, thankfully.)  Man, the second novel in the series is so thoroughly bleak and cold and exhausting, with little moments of comfort tucked in every now and then, and a happy ending truly seized from the jaws of death.  Reading it now I'm older: I'm always impressed how these novels are so tightly compressed and plotted: every named item in Joanna's capacious handbag/backpack is going to come in useful sometime, every minor incident along the way will turn out to be important to the plot.

Some prompts!
- Caris and Pella make a very odd odd couple.  We hear a fragment about their ever after: rumours flying, but Pella was so very pregnant, and Caris so very stolid, that they weren't getting very far.  Would you like to write more about what happens to them?  Does Pella have any children by Caris?  By the end of the second novel, Pella's husband seems to have started respecting her judgement and character - does she lean into having a governance role of the Empire?
- Caris changes from being an agent of death to wanting to be a healer.  I love that ghost phrase we hear from Suraklin in his final showdown where he remembers the Archmage advising Caris to be a healer not a sasennan.  How does this journey work out for him?
- Joanna several time talks about her relationship with her mother being difficult.  Joanna reads to me like she's on the Autism Awesome end of the ASD spectrum (very detailed, very passionate, has a hard time figuring most people out), and, as I get older, the more I wonder if Joanna's mother was awkwardly trying to help out her awkward daughter, rather than being demanding for the sake of it.  Does their relationship change over time?  How does adding Antryg to the mix change things?
(While Magister Magus doesn't make the character list, any cameos by him will be much enjoyed.)


Lord Peter Wimsey - Dorothy L. Sayers (Miss Climpson)

Miss Climpson mentions once that she had wanted to be a lawyer, but her father had strong opinions about education for women.  Tell me about the canon divergent AU in which this terrifying creature existed.  Time and place AUs are welcome, I just want to bask in the awesomeness of Kitty Climpson, KC (or QC depending on period).  More casefic with Miss Climpson would also be awesome, so would her beetling about apologising through Lord Peter's and Harriet's Happily Ever After.

Swan Lake - Bourne (The Girlfriend, The Prince)
I saw this for the first time a couple of years ago and it really really blew my mind.  I had had no idea that 
ballet (dance theatre?) could be like that, I can just spend the whole show watching people's faces rather than looking at the dancing because this, and I have now come to find out, all of Bourne's choreographies focus on story and character, and the dance steps are in service to that, rather than a wall of women in tutus moving in unison, and counting how many fouettes.  I love how there's always jokes and moments for the supporting characters being popped in every time there's a little gap in the main story, and I love the texture, how it's never clear how much of this is magical realism vs the Prince dissociating from reality, and I love how in this version it's the Prince who has to be rescued.

Prompts: 
- I just love the Girlfriend so damn much!  She's this happy, bubblegum pink girl breaking into the sordid dark red and grey life of the palace, as much of an intrusion into the Prince's unhappiness as the Swan/Stranger.  I love how she alone, of all the guests at the ball, seems to be worried about the Stranger, and how, even with her self-interest, she does actually try to look out for the Prince time and time again.  Tell me more about her!  How did she get invited into the Prince's orbit in the first place?  Does she survive the night of the ball?  Would she believe what the Prince had to say about swans?
- This starts with the Prince having nightmares about swans, and ends with the same staging but as a peaceful embrace, a moment of grace.  What are the Prince's dreams like as he's a child?  How do they develop over time? What is the splendid view he was interrupted from watching as a child, so that he could go and shake hands instead?

AU Prompt:
- What if it didn't have to be a tragedy?  What if the Prince and the Queen had managed to bring themselves to touch each other, just enough?  What if the Stranger had been appreciated but turned down?
  What if the Swan had managed to defeat the other swans?  What if the Girlfriend was just slightly less embarrassing?  Or the Prince hadn't seen her take the money?  What if...?

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Dear Yuletide Writer,
 
Thank you! I'm really looking forward to the story you're going to write, and I hope you have a good time with this exchange.
 
General Stuff About Me
I've been participating in Yuletide for a few years now and really enjoying it - both for the writing and the sheer cheerful juggernaut nature of the event. ;-) Some things I've noticed about myself is that I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense.   Apparently, poetry and interactive fiction are supposed to be opt-in now - if you've got an idea that works best in these formats - go for it!  Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy.  The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love.  
 
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Dear Yuletide Writer,
 
Thank you! I'm really looking forward to the story you're going to write, and I hope you have a good time with this exchange.
 
General Stuff About Me
I've been participating in Yuletide for a few years now and really enjoying it - both for the writing and the sheer cheerful juggernaut nature of the event. ;-) Some things I've noticed about myself is that I tend to enjoy more stories that are reasonably consistent with the original canon - so sequels and prequels and inbetween scenes, and I love it when a minor character gets their story expanded or someone does a nifty bit of world building on some little detail and makes it all make sense. Original characters are also fine, and I've seen some AUs and crossovers that have really blown me away, so please take this paragraph as an 'optional details are optional' section and write the story that will make you happy. The prompts I've given are also optional, please have fun with what you choose to write.  Also, stories that pass the Bechdel Test Are Love
 


Northanger Abbey - Jane Austen )

Women of NASA RPF )

Ocean's 8 )
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A friend recently pointed out to me that our local library website subscribes to a service called Bloomsbury Drama Online, which along with the text of a lot of well-known plays, also has some filmed and audio versions as well. (This includes radio plays, like a remake of Orson Welles' War of the Worlds starring Leonard Nimoy and diverse other Star Trek actors - but I digress.)

The recent gem I've been watching is the RSC version of Love's Labours Lost, one of the lesser known of Shakespeare's plays.  The basic plot is Boys vs Girls, with mostly the girls winning, and by golly did they have fun with it. It's staged in 1914 with all the pretty frocks and 'great house' architecture and the production team deciding to hell with it, this is a comedy, let's go for broke. (There was a lot of bonus humour in the form of bowling games and strategic use of teddy bears.  And the odd hair net.) They also spent a lot of time thinking through how they could put in even more song and dance numbers. Early on this is relatively modest, with a servant singing a modest aria, or some sentimental music playing as a lord recites a sonnet he has just composed; by the end of the play they've pulled out all the stops with fake Russians doing a cossack dance and the local villagers staging a panto that turns into a brawl, with a rousing anthem to finish up.

It's utterly sparkling, and an excellent way to spend two and a half hours.
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Northanger Abbey
And next we have Northanger Abbey, the first of Austen's novels accepted for publication, and heartbreakingly, one of the last two to be published, shortly after she had passed away.  Seriously, that must be one of the most infuriating things to happen to the author - the copyright was bought by a printer, who put an advertisement in a paper, and then sat on it unpublished and threatened Austen with legal action if she tried to sell it elsewhere.  During her poor years, paying back the ten pounds she'd earned on it was an expense too great, and she had to wait until she had independently reached success before she was able to get the rights back.  Her brother, who handled the transaction, made a point of waiting until after the paperwork was done to tell the publisher that he'd been sitting on an unpublished Austen novel.  It came paired with Austen's last completed novel, Persuasion, and as the pair together bookend themselves in the city of Bath, a teenager on her first big excursion, compared to a woman past her first bloom being sent back to a place full of unhappy memories where it rains a lot, there is a great sense of nuance and irony reading them back to back.
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 I'm up to Northanger Abbey and this section is so brilliant it needs its own post:

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...and if a rainy morning deprived them of other enjoyments, they were still resolute in meeting in defiance of wet and dirt, and shut themselves up, to read novels together. Yes, novels; for I will not adopt that ungenerous and impolitic custom so common with novel-writers, of degrading by their contemptuous censure the very performances, to the number of which they are themselves adding--joining with their greatest enemies in bestowing the harshest epithets on such works, and scarcely ever permitting them to be read by their own heroine, who, if she accidentally take up a novel, is sure to turn over its insipid pages with disgust. Alas! If the heroine of one novel be not patronized by the heroine of another, from whom can she expect protection and regard? I cannot approve of it. Let us leave it to the reviewers to abuse such effusions of fancy at their leisure, and over every new novel to talk in threadbare strains of the trash with which the press now groans. Let us not desert one another; we are an injured body. Although our productions have afforded more extensive and unaffected pleasure than those of any other literary corporation in the world, no species of composition has been so much decried. From pride, ignorance, or fashion, our foes are almost as many as our readers. And while the abilities of the nine-hundredth abridger of the History of England, or of the man who collects and publishes in a volume some dozen lines of Milton, Pope, and Prior, with a paper from the Spectator, and a chapter from Sterne, are eulogized by a thousand pens--there seems almost a general wish of decrying the capacity and undervaluing the labour of the novelist, and of slighting the performances which have only genius, wit, and taste to recommend them. "I am no novel-reader--I seldom look into novels--Do not imagine that I often read novels--It is really very well for a novel." Such is the common cant. "And what are you reading, Miss--?" "Oh! It is only a novel!" replies the young lady, while she lays down her book with affected indifference, or momentary shame. "It is only Cecilia, or Camilla, or Belinda"; or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language. Now, had the same young lady been engaged with a volume of the Spectator, instead of such a work, how proudly would she have produced the book, and told its name; though the chances must be against her being occupied by any part of that voluminous publication, of which either the matter or manner would not disgust a young person of taste: the substance of its papers so often consisting in the statement of improbable circumstances, unnatural characters, and topics of conversation which no longer concern anyone living; and their language, too, frequently so coarse as to give no very favourable idea of the age that could endure it.
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Pride and Prejudice
It is very easy to argue that this is the most popular and well known of the Austen novels, described by Jane herself as "rather too light and bright and sparkling."  The heroine, Elizabeth, is lively, vivacious, and flawed enough that we don't take a dislike to her on general principle, and of all the novels it has the most fairy tale like quality.  The older Bennet sisters, Jane and Elizabeth, while technically in the gentry class, marry well above their expectations to men who are (to quote Lucy Montgomery) "handsome and rich and good" all in one.  There are some more fairy tale tropes embedded in here: the three marriage proposals, the first two awful, the third one with the prospective groom showing respect for the woman, after her actions and strength of character have forced him to respect her; the ugly sisters are not step but blood and sisters-in-law elect, but fully ugly in their behaviour; the presence of not quite a fairy godmother but a wise and generous aunt; both princes, Mr Darcy and Mr Bingley, have to make journeys of self abnegation to reach the ending.  Bingley having to make amends for being so flightly is not as severe as having to wear out three pairs of iron shoes by walking; but Darcy's journey to London to seek out the venal Mrs Younge and the reprehensible Mr Wickham and bribe Wickham into becoming the relative of the family Darcy himself hoped to marry into is a true mortification for one so prideful.
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 Lady Susan
This is one of the lesser known works; it's a series of letters forming a novella length work.  Not only unpublished in Austen's lifetime, it didn't see the light of a typesetter's office until more than 50 years after her death.  I would say that it definitely fits into the category of juvenilia - the characters are very black and white: Lady Susan and Mrs Johnson are wholly wicked and self interested; Frederica (Lady Susan's benighted daughter) is very good; Mrs Vernon (the sister in law who is Lady Susan's antagonist) is both sensible and accurate in her suspicions of Lady Susan's motives.

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Persuasion
The most autumnal of the published works, and the one written as she was reaching the end of her life - ill, with doctors telling her and her family to hope for the best, but probably dreadfully tired.  There is a character in the book who is an invalid, who unlike the invalids/hypochondriacs in earlier books is not really a figure of fun, but at one point expresses gratitude for the goodwill of her carers (if taking a healthy interest in gossip), which I think may reflect Austen's own experiences - writing as a young woman in good health her novels had very little time for people who are fancying themselves always ill (no matter how ill they actually are.)  Certainly, being an invalid in the 19th century was a very expensive business, and you had to be quite wealthy to pull it off in style.
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Sense and Sensibility
It's been a long long loooooong time since I read this novel.  Coming to it fresh, it feels like the most publicly emotional of the published novels - Marianne is absolutely convincing as a teenage drama queen who has charm, but also holds nothing back of her emotional life, and has nowhere to go when things go badly.  We have several scenes in the novel where big emotional moments are handled in direct speech, where in later novels Austen will contain these intense feelings in letter, or, in a pinch, a conversation with a third party that is overheard or relayed to the other principal.  Charlotte Brontë is known for disliking Austen's work, complaining that "[A]nything like warmth or enthusiasm, anything energetic, poignant, heartfelt, is utterly out of place in commending these works: all such demonstrations the authoress would have met with a well-bred sneer, would have calmly scorned as outré or extravagant."  I think she would have liked this one best for its Gothicness, especially the duel and the bit where Marianne is gravely ill following a series of walks in the rain and Almost Dies.  Also, we have Willoughby (the villain) turning up unannounced late at night in the house where she is recovering because he desperately wants to redeem his character to Elinor, which again makes him more of a Brontë-esque villain.  But Austen has her own way - at the end of the book, Marianne recants her behaviour and tells her more reserved older sister that she wished she had behaved more like Elinor.  So the confined and outwardly calm container for the big emotional life wins.

I'm struck by the essential conservatism of the Austen novels.  Her characters are often struggling under the set order where capital is concentrated in a few individuals who actively scheme to keep wealth in as immediate the family as possible, and there is a very well-defined pecking order; but I don't think she had revolutionary sentiments around breaking the pecking order up or fighting for a more egalitarian society.  Her solutions to these woes are two-fold: that those who have wealth should use it justly (Mr Knightley in Emma, and Sir John Middleton and Colonel Brandon in Sense and Sensibility) instead of for foolish or selfish reasons (John and Fanny Dashwood and Fanny's mother in S&S, for instance), and to revise the ranking system for who is considered worthy - education and nice manners for example.  This does get interrogated sometimes - the kindly yet vulgar Mrs Jennings is initially looked down on by her two more genteel houseguests for retaining her connections with friends of her businessman husband, but ultimately is considered a great friend; the two daughters of Mrs Jennings have had their past polished up by an expensive school, but the sillier one (Mrs Palmer) is more approved of by the novel than the insipid elegant one (Lady Middleton).  There are other places where the deep unfairness of the laws around property aren't interrogated at all: Colonel Brandon's lost love Eliza was coerced into marriage with Brandon's brother for the sake of her large inheritance, divorces the brother, and ends up dying in a debtor's prison; Brandon is considered a good man for raising Eliza's daughter and taking the stigma of people assuming she's his bastard - but I'm struck by how the fortune he now enjoys really came from Eliza.  Once Eliza was married, her property became her husband's, and it passed down the male line, and that's that.  Marianne is seen as a reward to Colonel Brandon for his patience and his goodness, and while in the novel she grows to love him and they're happy, it does seem very arbitrary.  Fortunately for gender relations, Edward in this book is very much (as my friend Idiot puts it) Treasure, with no real motivation except to be fought over by Elinor and Lucy Steele, so that's something.  Speaking of which, the two villainesses, Lucy Steele and Fanny Dashwood are So Damn Mean.  In later books, the disagreeable or selfish characters often lack self-awareness - these two are spiteful because they can be, and because everyone expects them to be nicer, so they double down on their meanness.  And also, are repaid by getting everything they want.  Such is life.

Reading in the aftermath of Emma, here the ecosystem presented is that of genteel life - we hear less about the servant class in the village, and more about the goings on of the gentry class around Allenham and Barton, promoted by the very sociable Middleton family; many of these intimate families decamp en masse to London to continue with their visits.  Compared to Mansfield Park, it ends where Mansfield Park starts, with two sisters living in close proximity, one married to the patron of the other's husband.  Fortunately for the Dashwood sisters, they cohabit rather more happily than Lady Bertram and Mrs Norris, the book ends with the assurance that "among the merits and the happiness of Elinor and Marianne, let it not be ranked as the least considerable, that though sisters, and living almost within sight of each other, they could live without disagreement between themselves, or producing coolness between their husbands."

Battle of the Adaptations:
Adaptation 1: Emma Thompson rules the roost in screen writing her 1995 adaptation which she co-starred in with Kate Winslet, which kickstarted a good ten years of Austen-mania.  I've watched this a lot over the years, having just reread the novel, I am at awe at Thompson's lightness of touch in her work.  There are a number of places in the novel where Austen tells instead of showing; Thompson added a lot of material in the first act of the movie, meandering through the moments of Elinor's and Edward's love story and the precise awfulness of life at Norland under the auspices of Fanny Dashwood, that Austen got through briskly in the first chapter.  There are also some new elements, such as Margaret being a tomboy (I read a graphic novel adaptation once which recreated that character detail in its entirety.  ;-) )  While she compresses and rearranges events, and elides some characters, every emotional beat is approached spot on, usually capturing the Austen dialogue exactly.  Thompson's performance as actress so exquisitely captures the feeling of having to deal with everyone else's shitty stuff and having to keep it together for them, while having no one to turn to for her own problem, and how incredibly exhausting that is.  And Alan Rickman as Colonel Brandon is so tragic and so, so... you want to wrap him in a blanket and give him a hug.  It's also a masterwork for the sheer sense of comedy found in the movie: moments like making tea for a pack of crying women, the dumbshow around pretending you weren't doing anything important when a visitor arrives, the running joke about the roads and the weather being an appropriate topic of conversation - sadly, there's a funny conversation in the novel between Mrs Jennings and Elinor about Elinor's (not actually) engagement to Colonel Brandon which didn't make the cut.  One must always murder one's darlings, I expect.

The main downside for me is that Hugh Grant has done his shy stutterer act so many times that it's lost much of its appeal to me now.  I also like it because they put in little details about the life and times, like the fragile slippers in which gently bred young women were expected to walk the hills and muddy pooey streets in, and the novelty of steam engines.  However, because I'm a bit of a costume nerd, while the pantalettes that Marianne and Margaret were wearing that enabled them to climb trees and tumble down hills modestly were technically in period, they weren't in any way ubiquitous, and also (in period) would have been crotchless.  I'm still having trouble dealing with the idea of underwear as we know it, only being about 150 years old.

Adaptation 2: When I was checking IMDB for something, it turns out there was a 2008 adaptation which has duels and Marianne almost tumbling off a cliff.  Clearly this is the version that Marianne would rather we know.




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